Preliminary Task: Critical feedback video YouTube link

This image is of my Media Studies class and teacher reviewing and criticizing each other's Preliminary tasks. The link below will take you to a YouTube video addressing my criticisms on my Preliminary task and also what I am changing and will improve or take out. I have done this because its useful to these ideas for the tas in video or written format so I can always come back to it and remind myself of what ideas I had and was recommended.

https://youtu.be/jA3e8rdVpZQ

Preliminary Task: Blog plan

I have now completed my preliminary task and posted it on YouTube. In lesson time the class and I have reviewed my presentation and criticized it, and in my next blog I will be combining all the feedback from the class and also my one-to-one reviews with my teachers into one blog of information and also how I’m going to take action to change and improve my documentary, then I will draw up a storyboard in a separate blog and see how my teachers, friends, and others I will show,  react to the storyboard and create a blog on their feedback.