Critical reflection: Expository mode practice documentary

I enjoyed the creation process again, however, I could have gathered more clips instead of using only 3 long ones. I could have used more relaxing music I think, due to the relaxing voice over and long cuts. I could have a stabler hand when filming and walking. in convolution, I thought this expository mode practice documentary to be a success and may be using it in my real documentary, maybe in the starting sequences or as shots inbetween interviewing my subject.